Smokebongoncliff vs VernakuLa - Wu-Tang Corp. - Official Site of the Wu-Tang Clan

smokebongoncliff · 07-14-2006, 01:01 AM

1 round 10 - 16 lines first to 5 votes, 3-0 is knockout

yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up
the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up
im dressed up, with some nasty facny rhyme
there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind
You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon
your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin
tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been
not the type of mc to get the party crackin
Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man
when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin
he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin
yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven

pz first battle

07-26-2006, 06:29 PM

sry dun, forgot heres my verse

This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps
You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that
I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us
Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust
Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin
Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin
Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees
Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez
It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance
You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants

VOTE

tha god concept · 07-26-2006, 06:31 PM

i thought u didnt battle rookies vern?

07-26-2006, 06:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tha god concept

i thought u didnt battle rookies vern?

i made an exception

vote Concept

tha god concept · 07-26-2006, 06:37 PM

vote - vern
better punches

07-26-2006, 06:47 PM

votes

Stevebud23 · 07-26-2006, 07:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by smokebongoncliff

You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat

Close but smokebongoncliff takes it.

07-26-2006, 07:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stevebud23

Close but smokebongoncliff takes it.

funny how ur both from chicago, and this is the only battle youve voted on

0-0 lets get some real votes

07-26-2006, 09:00 PM

Vote

DVSK · 07-26-2006, 09:09 PM

werd i was gonna say 0-0

wrdply-nak
flow-clf
vcb-tie
crtvty-tie
pncs-nak

not great on either parts, but vern takes it

07-26-2006, 09:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusk

werd i was gonna say 0-0

wrdply-nak
flow-clf
vcb-tie
crtvty-tie
pncs-nak

not great on either parts, but vern takes it

peace to the gods dusk

yea i aint feelin my lyrics ether

1-0 peace nucca

07-27-2006, 12:34 AM

vote homos

Robert · 07-27-2006, 01:34 AM

smokingbongoncliff-
yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up
the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up
(ok opener...)

im dressed up, with some nasty fancy rhyme
there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind
(hmmmm,there is only one mankind)

You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
(wak)

i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon
your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin
(better....)

tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been
not the type of mc to get the party crackin
(this isnt a punch..)

Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man
when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin
(second line alright, the verse flow/wordplay is pretty good)

he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin
yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven
(average closer)

Vern-
This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps
You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that
(good opener, nice wordplay and on the attack)

I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us
Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust
(average)

Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin
Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin
(lol, nice second line)

Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees
Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez
(hmmmm...attacking some beez? the rhyme seems forced)

It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance
You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants
(nice finshing lines)

Overall Vern gets the vote, hope smokinbongoncliff keeps battling, but this was pretty straight forward, Vern had better punches, wordplay the whole deal....
peace to both writers
Vote=Vern

smokebongoncliff · 07-27-2006, 11:33 AM

yea i agree i should lose this. i really didnt put time into it. my verse was pretty much just jokes. i dno fun tho

Robert · 07-27-2006, 11:43 AM

cool, keep posting verses and voting coz no one fucking votes these days

07-14-2006, 01:01 AM	#1
smokebongoncliff WuTang is the Foundation Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 843 Rep Power: 9	Smokebongoncliff vs VernakuLa 1 round 10 - 16 lines first to 5 votes, 3-0 is knockout yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up im dressed up, with some nasty facny rhyme there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been not the type of mc to get the party crackin Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven pz first battle __________________ Now yo yo, whattup yo, time is runnin out. It's for real though, let's connect politic - ditto. We could trade places, get lifted in the staircases. Word up, peace incarcerated scarfaces Last edited by smokebongoncliff; 07-14-2006 at 01:14 AM.

07-26-2006, 06:31 PM	#3
tha god concept akaTRIFE TYSON~spitboxer Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: B.C CANADA Age: 33 Posts: 2,739 Rep Power: 12	i thought u didnt battle rookies vern? __________________ "When I die bury me with the LO on... Official to the death for all eternity and so on" *Lo Down & Dirty* *" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL"* *"MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface*

07-26-2006, 06:37 PM	#5
tha god concept akaTRIFE TYSON~spitboxer Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: B.C CANADA Age: 33 Posts: 2,739 Rep Power: 12	vote - vern better punches __________________ "When I die bury me with the LO on... Official to the death for all eternity and so on" *Lo Down & Dirty* *" WASTED ON THE USUAL WIT MOM DUKES WAITIN ON THE FUNERAL"* *"MY MOUSTACHE LIKE ADOLFS"-Ghostface*

07-26-2006, 09:09 PM	#10
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	werd i was gonna say 0-0 wrdply-nak flow-clf vcb-tie crtvty-tie pncs-nak not great on either parts, but vern takes it __________________

07-27-2006, 01:34 AM	#13
Robert 1% Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: The Invisible College Posts: 7,392 Rep Power: 52	smokingbongoncliff- yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up (ok opener...) im dressed up, with some nasty fancy rhyme there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind (hmmmm,there is only one mankind) You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat (wak) i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin (better....) tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been not the type of mc to get the party crackin (this isnt a punch..) Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin (second line alright, the verse flow/wordplay is pretty good) he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven (average closer) Vern- This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that (good opener, nice wordplay and on the attack) I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust (average) Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin (lol, nice second line) Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez (hmmmm...attacking some beez? the rhyme seems forced) It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants (nice finshing lines) Overall Vern gets the vote, hope smokinbongoncliff keeps battling, but this was pretty straight forward, Vern had better punches, wordplay the whole deal.... peace to both writers Vote=Vern __________________

07-26-2006, 06:29 PM	#2
VernakuLa Guest Posts: n/a	sry dun, forgot heres my verse This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants VOTE

07-27-2006, 12:34 AM	#12
VernakuLa Guest Posts: n/a	vote homos

07-27-2006, 11:33 AM	#14
smokebongoncliff WuTang is the Foundation Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 843 Rep Power: 9	yea i agree i should lose this. i really didnt put time into it. my verse was pretty much just jokes. i dno fun tho __________________ Now yo yo, whattup yo, time is runnin out. It's for real though, let's connect politic - ditto. We could trade places, get lifted in the staircases. Word up, peace incarcerated scarfaces

07-27-2006, 11:43 AM	#15
Robert 1% Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: The Invisible College Posts: 7,392 Rep Power: 52	cool, keep posting verses and voting coz no one fucking votes these days __________________

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