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Old 07-14-2006, 01:01 AM   #1
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Default Smokebongoncliff vs VernakuLa

1 round 10 - 16 lines first to 5 votes, 3-0 is knockout



yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up
the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up
im dressed up, with some nasty facny rhyme
there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind
You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon
your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin
tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been
not the type of mc to get the party crackin
Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man
when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin
he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin
yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven


pz first battle
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Old 07-26-2006, 06:29 PM   #2
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sry dun, forgot heres my verse

This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps
You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that
I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us
Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust
Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin
Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin
Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees
Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez
It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance
You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants


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Old 07-26-2006, 06:31 PM   #3
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i thought u didnt battle rookies vern?
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Old 07-26-2006, 06:32 PM   #4
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i thought u didnt battle rookies vern?
i made an exception

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Old 07-26-2006, 06:37 PM   #5
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vote - vern
better punches
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Old 07-26-2006, 06:47 PM   #6
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Old 07-26-2006, 07:18 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by smokebongoncliff
You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
Close but smokebongoncliff takes it.
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Old 07-26-2006, 07:43 PM   #8
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Close but smokebongoncliff takes it.
funny how ur both from chicago, and this is the only battle youve voted on

0-0 lets get some real votes
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Old 07-26-2006, 09:00 PM   #9
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Old 07-26-2006, 09:09 PM   #10
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werd i was gonna say 0-0

wrdply-nak
flow-clf
vcb-tie
crtvty-tie
pncs-nak

not great on either parts, but vern takes it
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Old 07-26-2006, 09:13 PM   #11
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werd i was gonna say 0-0

wrdply-nak
flow-clf
vcb-tie
crtvty-tie
pncs-nak

not great on either parts, but vern takes it
peace to the gods dusk

yea i aint feelin my lyrics ether

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Old 07-27-2006, 12:34 AM   #12
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vote homos
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Old 07-27-2006, 01:34 AM   #13
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smokingbongoncliff-
yo fuck wit me you will get quickly bent up
the toes and the rest up is just straight up messed up
(ok opener...)

im dressed up, with some nasty fancy rhyme
there aren't too many mankinds that has as an advanced mind
(hmmmm,there is only one mankind)

You wish you were doin time, so you could drop the soap
after he fucks you in the ass you'd tell him you deepthroat
(wak)

i breathe smoke, like an angrey dungeon dragon
your rhymes are always slackin, wack raps i am attackin
(better....)

tuff actin tinactin, the fool is old fashon he always has been
not the type of mc to get the party crackin
(this isnt a punch..)

Master marksman, i leave tracks on your arm man
when you smoke the blunts this niggas always barffin
(second line alright, the verse flow/wordplay is pretty good)

he dont eat and shit, starvin like marvin
yo i gotta bounce pizzas done heatin in the oven
(average closer)

Vern-
This kid is quick to jaw flap, a mall rats chopped raps
You dressin fancy? Only at ya funeral if you want that
(good opener, nice wordplay and on the attack)

I mawl cats, Think ya killin me? Naw, stop da fight wit us
Cuz throwin ya earn out, be the only way I'd bite the dust
(average)

Spittin throw backs, really stop the test, you lost lyin
Kid blows ass, I mean cops arrest this cat to stop rhymin
(lol, nice second line)

Startin a battle wit me? Smart as attacking some bees
Kids retarted, he started un - rapping his steez
(hmmmm...attacking some beez? the rhyme seems forced)

It aint like you bein bruised, you bein hit n advance
You jus straight seepin blue, cryin n shittin ya pants
(nice finshing lines)

Overall Vern gets the vote, hope smokinbongoncliff keeps battling, but this was pretty straight forward, Vern had better punches, wordplay the whole deal....
peace to both writers
Vote=Vern
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Old 07-27-2006, 11:33 AM   #14
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yea i agree i should lose this. i really didnt put time into it. my verse was pretty much just jokes. i dno fun tho
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Old 07-27-2006, 11:43 AM   #15
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cool, keep posting verses and voting coz no one fucking votes these days
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