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gone now sorry.
Last edited by Inspektah Meth-Tical; 11-30-2010 at 04:15 AM. |
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Good try...I like the lyrics.
But you need to pronounce your words better, try to open your mouth next time. and you were going a bit too fast, so to avoid doing that, you need to take some words out out of the bars, that make it uneven.
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Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate.
I willl definetly take it into account. |
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anyone else?
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